I'm surprised Takoha himself didn't pick up on this, but on page 4, Deido calls him Takoha, not Yomiza...Not sure if intentional or a slip-up from the author.
"It ruins the mood of the piece, does it not?"
I understand what he's saying, and I'm inclined to agree with him, but Deido doesn't seem to realize that humans have imaginations, which lets them put whatever they want into their art, and to interpret others' art however they wish. Can't wait to see the megalo-aneurism he'll have once other people see his work and his finds out what "death of the artist" is.