Soul Land III - The Legend of the Dragon King - Ch. 142

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I would say the longer the better cuz 1chap 1 raw leaves u hanging while 1chap 2raw it continues more,also when are the yt chapters getting uploaded here
 
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The length of the chapters is better but you seriously need to focus on the translations to English more especially if you asking for support from readers.

I don't know how many comments I've seen notifying your group that it's Shrek not sherk.
 
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Much better than it was a dozen chapters ago, just problems here and there with the spelling or random added words, etc.
For example, with the substitutions I would make:
Now, Tang Wulin only needs Tousand year spirit items to break his secound seal
Now, Tang Wulin only needs some Thousand year old spirit items to break his second seal
Tang Wulin believes that is he could break his secound seal his martial soul would definitely improve again
Tang Wulin believes that if he can break his second seal, then his martial soul would definitely improve again.
And so, the four students from class zero became not so eye catching under his aura
And so, the four students from class zero became less eye catching hidden by his aura
In fact, the class zero has always existed, but it doesn't appear in the eye of the public any more.
In fact, class zero has always continued to exist, but it doesn't appear in the eye of the public any more.
In your eyes, to (till) what extent can they reach in the future?
In your eyes, to what extent can they reach in the future?
That's some of them, a few I had to make an educated guess for and could be wrong on what it was going for, but this is all I had to work with.
 

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