I think it's really good, but on occasion it's a little... fast? Is that the word for it?
I've noticed that like some chapters have several different plot developments/interactions with seemingly rough/sudden transitions. It's like he's at the office one moment talking to new characters, then another moment he's out in the wild fighting a monster with no delay.
Maybe I'm just reading too fast but it's a little jarring that some interactions just happen so quickly and the story moves on like "snap!"