Star-Lit Survival

[MangaDex]

 

[Firetruckme420]

Killing spree - the anime

 

[GrayOverloard]

not bad, but needs some work in terms of flowing well, there are missing panels. also, 2 characters looked exactly the same like twins but with different shirts. Maybe work on that, but its good nevertheless.

 

[pandanoia]

Seems like this might be this guy's first shot at making manga, but it's a really good start! It could flow a bit better, but I could see this being great if you ever decided to revisit this and revise it.