That last page is really confusing to me, I guess the chapter cuts off right in the middle of their conversation so maybe that's intentional, but the dialogue seems very off.
"you're the coach, but isn't it foolish to not give a strategy at all?" says the umpire, when the coach is literally walking out to give a strategy right now
"don't let the red team hit!" okay, how?
"it's impossible for them to hit!" but they just DID
"I'm mistaken" about what? it being impossible???
And a few pages before, on pg. 36, the dialogue repeats in the two top speech bubbles. Was this intentional, or an accident?
Anyway, thanks for the chapter! I'm excited to see what's going on here.