Can you combine Pages 37 and 38?Diclaimer:
I'm not much of a cleaner/re-drawer/editor/typesetter.
I will continue working on this, but feel free to pick up/snipe. I'll be very happy if anyone else with more experience would.
I legit don't know how I missed that. I mean, I did remember to combine the cover spread, but this eluded me apparently.Can you combine Pages 37 and 38?
You do realise that the guy in the opening is her dad right? There is also no incest tag on any websites, so I wouldnt put my money on him having done anything else than torture herDid you not see the opening page? It's obvious the guy did some type of abuse to her, sexual or not. Don't be shocked if it's revealed it included sexual assault too.
Wtf is going on?
Well since this do have the sexual violence tag, please dont add a fucking guy into all of the sexual things atleast… No kissing, no sex, no rape, no nothing involving guys
a series where the main characters are both abused and girls
demands it not be because of a guy
It's trauma porn if it happens in the present and involves men but not the past? Avoid the manga if these topics are triggering, that's perfectly fine, but this is a goofy assumption to make.YIKES
This has the potential to be very graphic and triggering. Not for me tbh.
Hope they both end up happy and get some therapy, and that the psycho dude on the flashbacks (and probably the one torturing/watching someone get tortured) ends up in jail. The backstory would be 10x worse if he’s her actual father — which the way he says she’s “his product” heavily implies.
Anyways, since I fear the s*xual vi*lence might involve gross men doing terrible things to girls multiple times (including r-wording) and/or it being mentioned/implied a lot, not something like Marie forcing herself on Aki ONCE (or the other way around), I’ll take my leave.
If only it were something that happened in the past and the reason why MC is the way she is, I’d be ok with it, but with that last page I am not so sure this will be a story about her doing some fucked up stuff because of her past and then overcoming it. This gives me trauma p0rn vibes instead of tackling serious stuff in flashbacks for some complex storytelling.
For those who like those types of stories, have fun. But as a young woman that’s some nightmare fuel right there
I assumed "gross men" because that was the direction it seemed to be taking ("we live in a society" and all that). What I meant to say is that if the story is just about them getting abused, targeted by s*x offenders, and etc, I'd seem like trauma p0rn. If brief flashbacks are here and there, and there is progress and it's about getting over that trauma, then ok using strong ass scenes is a way to build the narrative. I just said I want them to be heal and not constantly be in the "them against evil men who are always out there to want something from them (and will take it forcefully if needed)" narrative.It's trauma porn if it happens in the present and involves men but not the past? Avoid the manga if these topics are triggering, that's perfectly fine, but this is a goofy assumption to make.