Sugar Sugar Rune - Vol. 2 Ch. 8 - Vanilla Asserts Herself

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On page 36, "Why settle for red and pink when noir can't compete with them" ; can't compete means it's way worse, order should be reversed ("when they can't compete with noir"), or change the word to something else. As it is, it feels like Pierre is dissing his own methods 😅
But other than that, nice.
 
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On page 36, "Why settle for red and pink when noir can't compete with them" ; can't compete means it's way worse, order should be reversed ("when they can't compete with noir"), or change the word to something else. As it is, it feels like Pierre is dissing his own methods 😅
But other than that, nice.
Hi dear! Thank you so much. We corrected ;)
 

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