very fun translation! minor gripes are few but i would definitely make note of the other manga and pop cultural stuff referenced in this little thing, namely ultraman/ultraseven in chapter two, and urusei yatsura + tensai bakabon in the third chapter. even if some jokes are a little hard, i would recommend hand-picking any things that don't make sense and googling to see if they are references to anything (the fool in the maze is bakabon's papa btw, incredibly iconic character in comedy manga)