Surviving the Cataclysm
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The art is a lot of AI slop, things like guns firing full cartridges instead of just the bullet, grilled rats that look to have been image sourced as grilled chicken drumstick then mashed together with a rodent, and inconsistent character anatomy.
The physics don't make sense; an exploding star 10 billion light years away has somehow made earth (as observed with US $50 bills) a near complete wasteland. 10 Billion light years is a tenth of the observable universe not galaxy, universe. To accomplish that, the star would have had to have enough mass and explosive force to be equivalent to a second big bang event especially if it is fighting against the expansion of the universe.
Now this complaint is completely personal, but I hate when everyone is referred to as brother or sister. About to fight to the death with an enemy, brother. Just met a girl that was completely unknown to you, nope, sister. This person is literally your cousin, hey brother. Use their names or omit the completely unnecessary familial terms, otherwise it makes things convoluted when actual family members are introduced. It wouldn't even bother me if it didn't occur every other line.
Maybe this will improve over time but I'm going to sideline this until it hits several dozen chapters (8 chapters currently).
The physics don't make sense; an exploding star 10 billion light years away has somehow made earth (as observed with US $50 bills) a near complete wasteland. 10 Billion light years is a tenth of the observable universe not galaxy, universe. To accomplish that, the star would have had to have enough mass and explosive force to be equivalent to a second big bang event especially if it is fighting against the expansion of the universe.
Now this complaint is completely personal, but I hate when everyone is referred to as brother or sister. About to fight to the death with an enemy, brother. Just met a girl that was completely unknown to you, nope, sister. This person is literally your cousin, hey brother. Use their names or omit the completely unnecessary familial terms, otherwise it makes things convoluted when actual family members are introduced. It wouldn't even bother me if it didn't occur every other line.
Maybe this will improve over time but I'm going to sideline this until it hits several dozen chapters (8 chapters currently).
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