Suzuka - Vol. 2 Ch. 7 - Secret
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The number of times '*ould of' gets used instead of '*ould've' (to clarify, for would, could, or should) causes my OCD editor side to go crazy. I realize a lot of people do that, so I get it, but it would be nice if editors, even of scanlations, would have a bit better understanding of the language they're translating into.
But, still... it's a free translation, so I'm not all that bothered. But still just enough to mention.
In any case, I like the growing relationship between the main pair. The progression's pretty good, so far. I do feel like he deserved Saotome cooling him off, as he was getting a bit too excited over sharing that moment with Suzuka- I mean, yes, good moment of emotional bonding, so to speak, but he needs to not get too ahead of himself. There's a sign of interest or three, but he needs something more substantial before he can start celebrating to that extent, and being that pleased with himself. Maybe even a definitive sign of affection, which I'm not quite sure if that counts.
But, still... it's a free translation, so I'm not all that bothered. But still just enough to mention.
In any case, I like the growing relationship between the main pair. The progression's pretty good, so far. I do feel like he deserved Saotome cooling him off, as he was getting a bit too excited over sharing that moment with Suzuka- I mean, yes, good moment of emotional bonding, so to speak, but he needs to not get too ahead of himself. There's a sign of interest or three, but he needs something more substantial before he can start celebrating to that extent, and being that pleased with himself. Maybe even a definitive sign of affection, which I'm not quite sure if that counts.
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