Suzuka doth protest too much. But, to be fair, she's pining for a (for the time being, anyway) taken man.
Also Hattori being about as crass as I'd expect. Bastard has no delicacy outside of when he's actually being a smooth operator, to the point I've been questioning his abilities since his early 'successes'... Makes his ease of talking to women and girls early on in the story feel like a fluke, the way he just sticks his foot in his mouth repeatedly.
And Yamato continuing to fight the fact he actually has a stronger connection with Suzuka than Honoka. The more and longer he denies, the harder it's going to be on Honoka when he has to tell her the hard truth, and this farce of a relationship ends.
And, yeah, the translation quality's suffering. I wonder if it gets better after the next scanlation group change, from Anime-Source to S.O.S., or if that's just a change of name? At least it's not too hard to follow, but it still makes me long for when the worst mistakes were some of the common grammar sins like "should of" instead of "should've".