One probably needs some familiarity with that Synduality noir setting, otherwise this feels a bit odd to read. It doesn’t really become clear whether the protagonists are supposed to be scavengers or a military unit, or what they’re supposed to be fighting against, with how heavily they’re armed. The romance aspect is also front, left and center, so it doesn’t work that well as an adventure story, and I don’t think there’s going to be any sex at all.