Takopi’s Original Sin - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - To the You in 2016

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You see it coming a mile away and it still delivers the right hit.

Great start, both main characters are interesting. I specially like how naïve, dumb and adorable Pi is.
the scenes are impactful. most of the picture are really bright ,simple and happy. so when they made a dark, detailed and horrific scene it delivers.
 
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I feel like this is akin to walking a tightrope that stretches on to your destination. Once you step on it, you can never go back. You might fall trying to.
I hope this will be a good destination.
 
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Had I relied purely on the synopsis, that an alien wanted to make a little girl happy, it sounds so childish and I wouldn't have read this. I have never been so wrong and so glad that I was after reading this first fucking chapter.
 
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I honestly didn't see her committing suicide coming honestly. I thought she would actually become friend with them somehow and it might come back to bite her. Then it got to the suicide then I thought oh did she kill her bully then suicide, then I realize it's (probably) just her mom
 

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