Kurona best girl.
Some nitpickings, if you don't mind:
- Page 7: christmas
- Page 9: ”not not”, hyphens missing on ”silent pressure”
- Page 14: embarrassing
- Page 15: orquesta -> orchestra, abbreviation, listenting, "parts where each song plays"
- Page 21: Kurona’s middle name as mentioned above (also there's a blank speech bubble)
- On the analysis page, ommited -> omitted
Also, when dividing words on two lines, the hyphen should be at the end of the first line instead of the beginning of the second (and words should be divided between syllables).
Sorry and thanks