I’m almost certain that when the bear/imp or whatever, Lakotan, says “Transformation” on page 14, the actual term would be “Hentai”. He’s calling MC a perv for wanting to get beat up by a cute girl.
Page 17 should say that hero has been defeated, not killed.
My bigger problem than the translation is the typesetting, with words split across lines awkwardly. It makes reading this a chore.