Tensei Shoujo no Rirekisho - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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That kid awakened something inside after that fight :dogkek:
An M at such a young age... that's rough buddy.

That aside, this seems interesting.
 
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Well, that was a cool takedown. Off to a good start, hope it can keep up!

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starts off with [I don't approve you-duel-win] with only 1 chapter

the synopsis tells an interesting future plot: declining magician,
so eventually they'll need to rely on someone with skill and no magic

now the critics:
that weird "be grateful" translation, tho
also toothpick and tooth brush instead of threshing machine,
and lastly, a bit proofreading needed on the pronouns
 
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starts off with [I don't approve you-duel-win] with only 1 chapter

the synopsis tells an interesting future plot: declining magician,
so eventually they'll need to rely on someone with skill and no magic

now the critics:
that weird "be grateful" translation, tho
also toothpick and tooth brush instead of threshing machine,
and lastly, a bit proofreading needed on the pronouns
I didn't consider finding a more appropriate definition for "toothbrush" when I worked on it. Now that I look at it, I realize it doesn't make much sense. Next time, I'll take more time to proofread. I spend too much time on redrawing and wanted to finish this chapter quickly, so I may have overlooked that.
+ Re-uploaded pages with "threshing machine"
 

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Huh.. So she invented the threshing machine, it became "famous" and despite it being public knowledge that she's the inventor (at least to the extent where Claude was able to track her down without any uncertainty that she was in fact the inventor despite being just a child) she is still treated like dirt instead of receiving some gratitude and/or admiration of those around her.. Makes me really wanna see what happened in that first bit they glossed over here :nyoron:
 
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I didn't consider finding a more appropriate definition for "toothbrush" when I worked on it. Now that I look at it, I realize it doesn't make much sense. Next time, I'll take more time to proofread. I spend too much time on redrawing and wanted to finish this chapter quickly, so I may have overlooked that.
+ Re-uploaded pages with "threshing machine"
Thanks for translating! Also, you can also cross reference the web novel if it gets confusing.
Huh.. So she invented the threshing machine, it became "famous" and despite it being public knowledge that she's the inventor (at least to the extent where Claude was able to track her down without any uncertainty that she was in fact the inventor despite being just a child) she is still treated like dirt instead of receiving some gratitude and/or admiration of those around her.. Makes me really wanna see what happened in that first bit they glossed over here :nyoron:
It isnt that public knowledge, only ones who know is her village and
The magicians who came to her village, when they came, her parents hoped she was a mage but the magicians said she isnt but they saw the thershing machine and mass produced it with magic.

Overall, her village treated her well. But her parents lost interest in her when they heard she isnt a magician. They were pretty much scum, not the worst kind since it wasnt like they harmed her or took bad care of her, but they were pretty selfish. Though they may have thought selling her would be good for both of them. They get money and she gets to live with a quasi noble. Their society has a culture of giving up children who are magicians to nobility

But I assure you she will get no shortage of gratitude in the future, so much so it brings her dread
She did a lot more for the village than the treshing machine, just not all of it bore fruit that fast due to trial and error. The village chief son leaves the village later and starts a cult calling the MC a messenger from god. MC once she learns about it tries to get him to stop and he agrees, only to later learn he keeps twisting her words in a weird way and grows the cult even more lol
 
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Hmm, did the manga just skipped how she died hit by
Car-kun
before reincarnating? also I think many things happen during the Garigari village, not just inventing the thrashing machine...
She also taught the the children how to fish or should I say alternative way of getting food so that the village doesn't starve also at the hope that her parents will love her but her efforts are in vain tho cuz she got sold just like what happen at the start of this chapter. Also feel free to add more info or correct me if I am wrong cuz I read this 3 years ago
except for the spoilers, I think it's the same as the WN(I hope so) but it's worth 17 wn chapter just skipped(bruh moment), if some of you are interested to read the WN just go to this link:
https://www.novelupdates.com/series/tensei-shoujo-no-rirekisho/
 
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I like it! Nice start.
I wouldn't use the word "magician" though. Magicians are entertainers. I'm assuming the original used "mahou-tsukai"? Just say "magic user" or continue to use "mage" or something.
 
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Ok, good start, she basically had already made her mark in this new world but as a broke ass villager... Now she gonna be known as the op maid? 🤣
 
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Hmm, did the manga just skipped how she died hit by
Car-kun
before reincarnating? also I think many things happen during the Garigari village, not just inventing the thrashing machine...
She also taught the the children how to fish or should I say alternative way of getting food so that the village doesn't starve also at the hope that her parents will love her but her efforts are in vain tho cuz she got sold just like what happen at the start of this chapter. Also feel free to add more info or correct me if I am wrong cuz I read this 3 years ago
except for the spoilers, I think it's the same as the WN(I hope so) but it's worth 17 wn chapter just skipped(bruh moment), if some of you are interested to read the WN just go to this link:
https://www.novelupdates.com/series/tensei-shoujo-no-rirekisho/

She also taught them how to make sandels and farming techniques like fertilizer and rotations. But farming techniques were just started and they spent years on trial and error on small land and now since results came in were about to scale it.

It might also include some basic herbology but it isnt clear if that was done during the village or later when she meats Mama kou
 
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The goose laid a gold egg once, and parents decided to sell her.
How foolish :/
They are

There is a food shortage due to lack of mages, so what they did was throw out all the rejects into their own expiremental villages and try to have them figure out how to fend for themselves or die trying. So you can imagine her parents arent the brightest bulbs. There is also a culture of selling your child to nobility if they are a mage so they probably didnt even think much of it
 

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