Man, that was just minor tweaking, @zmw_adri is real MVP and hardworker hereHuge thanks to @fadingbang for his work in proofreading and his help in improving the writing in general! Chapter 36.2 will drop soon-ish (maybe another day).
it feels like this was written in a scramble to end the kidnapping arc because no one liked itholy SHIT, how utterly stupid this whole thing is. The kidnappers? What kind of INCOMPETENT IDIOTS leave their target just laying on the ground with tall grass she could easily hide in? The ''kidnapping within kidnapping'' (what is this kh darkness within darkness bullshit) that ultimately goes nowhere is dumb as well. Her 'self sacrifice' moment followed up by her immediately screaming for help, like wtf do you expect them to do? Magically pop up by your side, defeat the guys and rescue you?
Besides that, the 'as long as we have the body it's fine, even if it's just the corpse' got me wondering why they want her in the first place, what do they plan to do with her (and if it's such a 'whatever' situation why he didn't just knock her out or kill her on the spot and bring the body?). Doubt they will pull something else after that so I guess all that's left is watch where she goes from this/how long it'll take for her friends to find her in the grass or something
Thanks for the chapter
She couldn't hide if it weren't for her knowledge of her previous life allowing her to be strategic, combined with the visual barrier preventing them from seeing her. No one expects a toddler to pull what she has, let alone be capable of doing so.holy SHIT, how utterly stupid this whole thing is. The kidnappers? What kind of INCOMPETENT IDIOTS leave their target just laying on the ground with tall grass she could easily hide in? The ''kidnapping within kidnapping'' (what is this kh darkness within darkness bullshit) that ultimately goes nowhere is dumb as well. Her 'self sacrifice' moment followed up by her immediately screaming for help, like wtf do you expect them to do? Magically pop up by your side, defeat the guys and rescue you?
Besides that, the 'as long as we have the body it's fine, even if it's just the corpse' got me wondering why they want her in the first place, what do they plan to do with her (and if it's such a 'whatever' situation why he didn't just knock her out or kill her on the spot and bring the body?). Doubt they will pull something else after that so I guess all that's left is watch where she goes from this/how long it'll take for her friends to find her in the grass or something
Thanks for the chapter
Bruh these mercenaries are SHIT. They can’t catch a crawling toddler.