That Villain's Life, I'll Live It Once

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Every part of the plot is the exact same one you've read in other otome manga a million times over step for step, and poorly executed at that. Copypasted characters with motivations and personalities like cardboard, no world building, messy writing overall and extremely forced progression. This is what I'd expect to get if I asked an AI to write a story like this.

The art is above average. That's about the only positive I can come to think of after being bored out of my mind reading through all this.
 
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The FL and ML are transmigrate into the world where they both join hand to work together and fall in love later. The plot is messy as the FL suddenly got appointed as the family successor after a sudden change in personality. For comedic effects, the FL mum who is verbally abused by the FL in the past has power on the father. The suspense in the story is meh as it is resolved in the the same or next chapter easily.
 

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