The Blood Princess and the Knight - Vol. 10 Ch. 326

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finally some old Characters make an appearance again, i dont know why but the author suddenly just forgot about the moon knight friends the Human Knight has.

I hope this gulan bs ends soon because it makes no sense from the begining. Why the hell does this badass vampire queen who just awakened legendary powers from her ancestors turn into someone else and gets weakened just because she tasted her blood.

Also she is supposed to be the vampire queen or even emperor now, no? no one back in the Vampire Realm cares that she has been gone so long, yeah she said she has to take care of things but not even sending some assistant or something?

What I also don't understand is how they were able to attack that Elven area some chapters prior and completely burn it down. So obviously they had the resources and manpower, now they are on this "escape" and suddenly they have become this small conspirator faction that is completely weak, but at the same time this Emperor has these divine powers with which she actually can easily wipe out 2/3 of all elves.

This gulan arc is was to random and sudden, i would've liked reading the human kingdom slowly crumble and become weaker, with factions rising trying to seize power. It would be initiated by the Gulan faction, which wants to restore the Gulan Empire, the family of the now revived Empress* uses their relations and power and makes their faction stronger.

*(The family of the now revived empress, the foster family of the mc human knight was the ones that revived the empress right? or am i misunderstanding smt?)

my first interpretation of the elvean rule over the humans would also be more fun, it's not that they simply rule the human kingdom directly, but rather occupy a few critical positions that allow them to control it indirectly. In the story it's just that the boss is an elf, and apparently most of his knights and the rest of the human army and officials just do what he says.

Another faction may be founded by Knights who reject the new Knight King, and still root for the old Knight King(MC) or something, they may simply want the human kingdom to be back in the hands of the people and reject the rule of the Gulan people.

you know, just a little political conflict that is heating up more and more, maybe the Cat Kingdom and other countries will get involved too and in the end we have a cool climax when we see the vampire again, maybe she is doing things with her aunt, who is also still alive btw and it finishes with the gulans getting beaten. Maybe the moon knights negotiate with the elveans and make a kingdom thats not only "for" humans but a kingdom thats more progressive and accepting of other races so that the elveans and the Humans live in harmony together or something.



But sadly we have this catshit of a story that makes no sense. And has no point, it feels ai generated because it has lost its cohesion and feels disconected to the begining of this manga. Cause and effect have been lost
 
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finally some old Characters make an appearance again, i dont know why but the author suddenly just forgot about the moon knight friends the Human Knight has.

I hope this gulan bs ends soon because it makes no sense from the begining. Why the hell does this badass vampire queen who just awakened legendary powers from her ancestors turn into someone else and gets weakened just because she tasted her blood.

Also she is supposed to be the vampire queen or even emperor now, no? no one back in the Vampire Realm cares that she has been gone so long, yeah she said she has to take care of things but not even sending some assistant or something?

What I also don't understand is how they were able to attack that Elven area some chapters prior and completely burn it down. So obviously they had the resources and manpower, now they are on this "escape" and suddenly they have become this small conspirator faction that is completely weak, but at the same time this Emperor has these divine powers with which she actually can easily wipe out 2/3 of all elves.

This gulan arc is was to random and sudden, i would've liked reading the human kingdom slowly crumble and become weaker, with factions rising trying to seize power. It would be initiated by the Gulan faction, which wants to restore the Gulan Empire, the family of the now revived Empress* uses their relations and power and makes their faction stronger.

*(The family of the now revived empress, the foster family of the mc human knight was the ones that revived the empress right? or am i misunderstanding smt?)

my first interpretation of the elvean rule over the humans would also be more fun, it's not that they simply rule the human kingdom directly, but rather occupy a few critical positions that allow them to control it indirectly. In the story it's just that the boss is an elf, and apparently most of his knights and the rest of the human army and officials just do what he says.

Another faction may be founded by Knights who reject the new Knight King, and still root for the old Knight King(MC) or something, they may simply want the human kingdom to be back in the hands of the people and reject the rule of the Gulan people.

you know, just a little political conflict that is heating up more and more, maybe the Cat Kingdom and other countries will get involved too and in the end we have a cool climax when we see the vampire again, maybe she is doing things with her aunt, who is also still alive btw and it finishes with the gulans getting beaten. Maybe the moon knights negotiate with the elveans and make a kingdom thats not only "for" humans but a kingdom thats more progressive and accepting of other races so that the elveans and the Humans live in harmony together or something.



But sadly we have this catshit of a story that makes no sense. And has no point, it feels ai generated because it has lost its cohesion and feels disconected to the begining of this manga. Cause and effect have been lost
It's mostly the same on the Web Novel but with some details
This is a common issue with Chinese fictional writing tho...
 
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finally some old Characters make an appearance again, i dont know why but the author suddenly just forgot about the moon knight friends the Human Knight has.

I hope this gulan bs ends soon because it makes no sense from the begining. Why the hell does this badass vampire queen who just awakened legendary powers from her ancestors turn into someone else and gets weakened just because she tasted her blood.

Also she is supposed to be the vampire queen or even emperor now, no? no one back in the Vampire Realm cares that she has been gone so long, yeah she said she has to take care of things but not even sending some assistant or something?

What I also don't understand is how they were able to attack that Elven area some chapters prior and completely burn it down. So obviously they had the resources and manpower, now they are on this "escape" and suddenly they have become this small conspirator faction that is completely weak, but at the same time this Emperor has these divine powers with which she actually can easily wipe out 2/3 of all elves.

This gulan arc is was to random and sudden, i would've liked reading the human kingdom slowly crumble and become weaker, with factions rising trying to seize power. It would be initiated by the Gulan faction, which wants to restore the Gulan Empire, the family of the now revived Empress* uses their relations and power and makes their faction stronger.

*(The family of the now revived empress, the foster family of the mc human knight was the ones that revived the empress right? or am i misunderstanding smt?)

my first interpretation of the elvean rule over the humans would also be more fun, it's not that they simply rule the human kingdom directly, but rather occupy a few critical positions that allow them to control it indirectly. In the story it's just that the boss is an elf, and apparently most of his knights and the rest of the human army and officials just do what he says.

Another faction may be founded by Knights who reject the new Knight King, and still root for the old Knight King(MC) or something, they may simply want the human kingdom to be back in the hands of the people and reject the rule of the Gulan people.

you know, just a little political conflict that is heating up more and more, maybe the Cat Kingdom and other countries will get involved too and in the end we have a cool climax when we see the vampire again, maybe she is doing things with her aunt, who is also still alive btw and it finishes with the gulans getting beaten. Maybe the moon knights negotiate with the elveans and make a kingdom thats not only "for" humans but a kingdom thats more progressive and accepting of other races so that the elveans and the Humans live in harmony together or something.



But sadly we have this catshit of a story that makes no sense. And has no point, it feels ai generated because it has lost its cohesion and feels disconected to the begining of this manga. Cause and effect have been lost
The biggest problem is that the setup for this Arc happened like 100+ chapters ago basically, then the entire Vampire realm arc came, and now for some reason this one happens.
It would have made much more sense if the gulan stuff happened before the vampire realm.
Wouldn't have solved all the other issues of this arc, but at least it would be slightly more coherent
 
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finally some old Characters make an appearance again, i dont know why but the author suddenly just forgot about the moon knight friends the Human Knight has.

I hope this gulan bs ends soon because it makes no sense from the begining. Why the hell does this badass vampire queen who just awakened legendary powers from her ancestors turn into someone else and gets weakened just because she tasted her blood.

Also she is supposed to be the vampire queen or even emperor now, no? no one back in the Vampire Realm cares that she has been gone so long, yeah she said she has to take care of things but not even sending some assistant or something?

What I also don't understand is how they were able to attack that Elven area some chapters prior and completely burn it down. So obviously they had the resources and manpower, now they are on this "escape" and suddenly they have become this small conspirator faction that is completely weak, but at the same time this Emperor has these divine powers with which she actually can easily wipe out 2/3 of all elves.

This gulan arc is was to random and sudden, i would've liked reading the human kingdom slowly crumble and become weaker, with factions rising trying to seize power. It would be initiated by the Gulan faction, which wants to restore the Gulan Empire, the family of the now revived Empress* uses their relations and power and makes their faction stronger.

*(The family of the now revived empress, the foster family of the mc human knight was the ones that revived the empress right? or am i misunderstanding smt?)

my first interpretation of the elvean rule over the humans would also be more fun, it's not that they simply rule the human kingdom directly, but rather occupy a few critical positions that allow them to control it indirectly. In the story it's just that the boss is an elf, and apparently most of his knights and the rest of the human army and officials just do what he says.

Another faction may be founded by Knights who reject the new Knight King, and still root for the old Knight King(MC) or something, they may simply want the human kingdom to be back in the hands of the people and reject the rule of the Gulan people.

you know, just a little political conflict that is heating up more and more, maybe the Cat Kingdom and other countries will get involved too and in the end we have a cool climax when we see the vampire again, maybe she is doing things with her aunt, who is also still alive btw and it finishes with the gulans getting beaten. Maybe the moon knights negotiate with the elveans and make a kingdom thats not only "for" humans but a kingdom thats more progressive and accepting of other races so that the elveans and the Humans live in harmony together or something.



But sadly we have this catshit of a story that makes no sense. And has no point, it feels ai generated because it has lost its cohesion and feels disconected to the begining of this manga. Cause and effect have been lost
Also, why did the knight need to die? Or be shattered? (I'm assuming die) will he come back? The story is titled "The Blood Princess and the Knight" AND THE KNIGHT

This part of the story should have been his time to shine, it was practically begging for it, but instead, we get a fem version of him being controlled by the Vampire.
 
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It's mostly the same on the Web Novel but with some details
This is a common issue with Chinese fictional writing tho...
Barely any detail on what is going on or how things work, very little character growth if any, and the plot moves from one event to the next with little to no transition.

Ok so... this happens then ends then and another thing happens then that ends. Yep, that's the typical story beat for Chinese writing.
 

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