page 2 :
- secretary girl : ... inspector ogata , ... shiraki kayo-san ... , cake shop-san ...
- detective guy : ... oohashi-shi ( -shi = mister ) ...
so in japan , a murderer can walk free after only 69 short days ? or 69 short weeks ?
page 3 :
the writings are : ... human-killer cake shop , ... go back , ... stop it , ... murderer , ... GTFO , ...
last panel : detective actually says : ... this is ...
page 5 :
- detective : ... kyouko-kun , ... boku am ...
- i guess secretary says : no need to say nonsensical bull-sh!ts , i will give my share of cakes to you .
and note that he is picking up cakes with a fork and a sharp knife .
page 6 :
on the cake is : ayako-chan ...
page 8 :
- an adult male says : i want to attend the birthday party of a little girl , and then i can see her and other boys and girls at this party .
- me : does that line sound wrong to you guys ?
page 9 :
- ... guests-sama ...
- ... onee-san ...
- ... oba-san baked a delicious cake for you ...
page 10 , panel 3 :
on the cup is "kana-chan" , the name of a friend of ayako .
- ayako : ... papa and mama ...
page 11 :
- ... ayako 's friends 's okaa-san ...
page 18 :
- detective : ... shiraki-san , ... ayako-chan ...
- ayako : ... oba-chan ...
note that the detective and secretary still wear the same clothes , but ayako and her mother changed their clothes .