I suppose this one was okay. Definitely better than that Garuda one, that's for sure. And the art's nice. Not the usual extremely detailed masculine sort, but a much softer and more elegant sort. That said, it's first three chapters are moving, while the latter is the more "I want her, No, I have her!" sort of storyline that's become a bit stale for me. Decent 5-6/10 for me.