The Daughter of Evil and Miss Devil - Ch. 15 - Why Did You Take Off Your Clothes?!

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When a story could be other quickly because of one conversation but you're ok with the author procrastinating because the gay is top tier
Like, it could be over, but would you tell someone you're not even friends with, yet, that you're actually a reincarnation from another world when your relationship with them is only moderately friendly?
 
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Like, it could be over, but would you tell someone you're not even friends with, yet, that you're actually a reincarnation from another world when your relationship with them is only moderately friendly?
One of them just needs to slip up and say some gen z slang in front of the other.
 
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Like, it could be over, but would you tell someone you're not even friends with, yet, that you're actually a reincarnation from another world when your relationship with them is only moderately friendly?
Yes. Plus I quite like the setup and romantic nature of them unknowingly falling in love with each other twice, even separated by a new world and a reincarnation (and I'm pretty sure that's the point). It makes their progression even sweeter to know that they can find each other no matter how they present. I personally wouldn't want them to find out anything until they've already fallen in love here.
 
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Kaye is obviously already crushing. I wouldn't expect them to mention their reincarnation until they're seriously considering each other as life partners. I'd imagine the guilt of "forgetting" their old love interest might make something slip then (like in this scene). Otherwise there's no real reason to randomly mention that you died and got reincarnated, to a person.
YES that is what i think to when i see comments about wanting for the other to know such an HUGE secret! like if the author actually knows how to write an story they will reveal this type of information in a way that makes logical sense and story wise sense! and DEFIANTLY not now! a little later is better! so that they can build their relationship without the past they shared! that will be really nice romance!

for now the story is quite good, can’t wait for more! and let’s hope it keeps the quality until the end!
 
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I do agree the scene was well made in this way.
Granted Kaye could have dropped an hint mentioning the earthquake (or if the world doesn't have natural quakes, earth tremors)
but it isn't needed
 

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