That's a wrap. Almost all the dialogue here is different than Chapter 1 (For comparison, the only difference in 0.1 and 0.2 was that she said ooo instead of uwaa, I think)
While it reads more naturally this way, the actual Major is more confident in her lines, which I thought was a cool detail. The "Who are these guys... foreigners?" line isn't in this version as well probably indicating that the whole plotline wasn't planned at first. (Author had like 5 months before serialization began after this won)
