The Hunter Lives In A rented Apartment - Ch. 6

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I get what the author is trying to convey, but this pacing is super rushed. If you want the intro arc to be short, make few notable moments compared to the many smaller moments and larger settings. None of the characters are fleshed out either, with parts of them being told instead of shown, and most of the plot development seems rushed.
Not gonna read this one.
 

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