THE iDOLM@STER Cinderella Girls - U149 - Ch. 108 - Summer Live Part 8

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Judging by the number of rather ambiguous phrases or scenes out of context, the author is still celebrating the New Year, lmao.
 
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Judging by the number of rather ambiguous phrases or scenes out of context, the author is still celebrating the New Year, lmao.
I can't do much about it rapidly changing between setting and who has POV in the first few pages, but I went ahead and made some of the dialogue more clear on pages 8, 9, 10, and 13 (40, 41, 42, and 45 in the volume). To be honest, I was worried about some of the dialogue in those pages not being clear when I was working on it, but I just wanted to get it out since I was running behind, knowing I could improve it later.
 
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I can't do much about it rapidly changing between setting and who has POV in the first few pages, but I went ahead and made some of the dialogue more clear on pages 8, 9, 10, and 13 (40, 41, 42, and 45 in the volume). To be honest, I was worried about some of the dialogue in those pages not being clear when I was working on it, but I just wanted to get it out since I was running behind, knowing I could improve it later.
Don't worry, I'm talking about the manga author.
 

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