Awww ... I thought you were going to do something Toriyama related on the last two pages. A Kamehameha shout on the last attack would have been decent. The maybe something else from Goku?
- Even A Low-Class Warrior Can Surpass An Elite, With Enough Hard Work.
- Your Spree Of Hatred Will End At The Hands Of A
Saiyan human, Like You've Always Feared!
- And This Is To Go... Even Further Beyond!
- Tell
Her them That I Had To Do This, Gohan Tian Chen. Goodbye, My Son Brother.
I got nothing original but ... good job!