I very very very vaguely remember reading this when it was just a one-shot, never knew 'till now it had a serialization 😱🙀🙀😱.
When reading it I got this really nostalgic feeling of why i really do love reading GL stories. It's nothing new but it has a weirdly nice simplicity to it, with it's minimal drama mixed in with its heartwarming scenes and sprinkled a little bit of conflict on top. It's set in a workplace AU which is a nice breath of fresh air from ur usual high school AU. I'd say the characters are pretty interesting and I did grow on them a little, it was truly nice seeing them happy. I was impressed with how much the author could fit inside just 6 chapters and with just 24-25 pages in each chapter. Each chapter was very well thought out.
But with how many things the author was trying to fit inside a chapter. There's definitely going to be things that won't fit inside. The pacing could've 100% been better maybe the author could've cut a back a little bit more on the conflic/dramat and use those extra pages to fill the holes a bit more, get to know the characters better. This story kind of feels like the author bit more then it could chew.
But alas the ending was pretty satisfying. And I will miss these lesbians.
Recommended?
Tl;DR: Simple cute and short story sprinkled with tiny bits of drama on top.