The Moonlight Villa on the Hill - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[dcm1302]

Neat

 

[Civi]

Wholesome little yokai 🥰

 

[ghostkun]

It's 'aight. Art's solid, even if some of the movement panels look a bit rough. The concept has room to grow, even if yokai live amongst us is a common enough trope. I like the fact the kid is a yokai too, rather than the expected special little human protagonist. Feels like it could use a hook or two.

If serialized, I think having this yakuza boss become the overarching thorn in the side of the protagonist would be the way to go.

 

[Aoitenshi]

Interesting premise.

 

[the_Bear_from_Bearcave]

It's 'aight. Art's solid, even if some of the movement panels look a bit rough. The concept has room to grow, even if yokai live amongst us is a common enough trope. I like the fact the kid is a yokai too, rather than the expected special little human protagonist. Feels like it could use a hook or two.

If serialized, I think having this yakuza boss become the overarching thorn in the side of the protagonist would be the way to go.

I don't agree, I already disliked that they didn't bother to kill and disappear bunch of evil guys who are already shown to regularly kidnap girls into slave trade (and since they know about weird blood, I guess also organ trade or something similar) and who even discovered their secret and could share it with some other baddies even from behind the prison bars. If they let the boss be thorn in their side after this stunt, I'd just drop this.

If it's dark enough to talk about regularly kidnapping girls into slave trade, not not even show them getting saved or anything, I want it to be also dark enough to have yokai murder the evil slavers. As it is, it feels bland already.