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@Massmada265
You're more capable than the author. I would be perfectly hooked if not the stabbing part, honestly. Also, additionally to your analysis, I wish the author can tell us the reason why MC never considered choosing a job that's easier to get. Hell, even just a reason (or just implying there is a proper reason) why he failed these interviews will do.
Stabbing and job are the two key reasons why MC became like that, and both of them are poorly designed. I'm afraid the author intentionally avoids them because he knows they are full of logical holes.
I can deal with problems like that when they appear in the middle/end of the story. But when you encounter them at the very start, it basically tells you about a poor level of story planning. I was reading too many shitty JP light novels where the only thing the author is capable of is to bait you with an interesting idea. I no longer have this hope that a story that wasn't thought out from the start will become magically well made someday in the future.
You're more capable than the author. I would be perfectly hooked if not the stabbing part, honestly. Also, additionally to your analysis, I wish the author can tell us the reason why MC never considered choosing a job that's easier to get. Hell, even just a reason (or just implying there is a proper reason) why he failed these interviews will do.
Stabbing and job are the two key reasons why MC became like that, and both of them are poorly designed. I'm afraid the author intentionally avoids them because he knows they are full of logical holes.
I can deal with problems like that when they appear in the middle/end of the story. But when you encounter them at the very start, it basically tells you about a poor level of story planning. I was reading too many shitty JP light novels where the only thing the author is capable of is to bait you with an interesting idea. I no longer have this hope that a story that wasn't thought out from the start will become magically well made someday in the future.