The Princess who Returns from Death, Wants to End the Repeating World - Ch. 3

[MangaDex]

 

[Fushiginiku]

I'm finding this story a little disjointed at this point. It's like pieces of various 'villainess' stories were just stitched together without too much thought as to whether they form a logical progression.

 

[lesseffective]

I'm finding this story a little disjointed at this point. It's like pieces of various 'villainess' stories were just stitched together without too much thought as to whether they form a logical progression.

It's so disjointed that the art for the first dealer was used at the end of page 28 when Zeke asked for a drink!

 

[Lucky]

I'm finding this story a little disjointed at this point. It's like pieces of various 'villainess' stories were just stitched together without too much thought as to whether they form a logical progression.

It definitely felt disjointed when the stoic, overly polite and analytically thinking heroine does a 'kyaa' like 4 times in a row, lol. I can't help but feel they're also piling on all the plot points at once.

 

[Elfteiroh]

It feels weird reading this…
I know that a lot of stuff happened in these 3 chapters, but it feels like nothing happened. There’s a lack of… drive?
… hard to pinpoint.
(I’m really not used to “complains” in comment like this, but I’m kinda lost on why I don’t like it. It’s like on the tip of my brain, but I can’t make that one last connection to figure it out. XD )