The Revenge of the Betrayed Strongest Knight - Ch. 1

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looks to be a revenge webtoon, i'm going to try to hold back too much judgement and give it a shot but yeah the first chapter hasnt really pulled me in.. the random site ads in place of speech bubbles doesnt help it either lol. it at least looks okay. i think the pacing is a big part throwing me off, i can get them wanting to rush the start to get to the revenge sooner, but, there are good and bad ways and bouncing from him being betrayed and burned to suddenly he's back and scarred and once again a hero to the people but doesnt see himself that way anymore so fast just idk.. feels off, like timey whimey bs kinda off lol..

i'll give them the benefit and try a few more chapters at least though, hopefully they have something in mind.

edit: came back after getting to ch14, and while i cant say it was thrilling, couple laughs and hmms, to avoid spoilers and any high expectations i'll just say it does look like with time this could be okay, maybe not great persay but at least something in the passable to worth-the-read, area.
 
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