The Sacred Lord of Scorching Summer - Ch. 13

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Wow! The pacing is all over the place. In one moment he's talking to girl #1 he saved from a trash suitor, you blink and now he's with his Master and the girl is nowhere in sight, and then another blink he wakes up God knows where in pile of hay to save girl #2.
Is the writer perhaps on crack as he writes this?
 

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