The Shaft of Light in the Blue

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Wow, this is actually better-written than your average shoujo fare. Some scenarios are familiar but the characters' responses and reactions are more natural (and therefore less cringey).

Hope this gets translated to completion! Great reads for the two stories so far.
 
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This was some pretty nice stuff. Good writing, a bit more in it than just generic people falling in love. People with personalities and a bit of development.
 

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