The Stellar Swordmaster

[MangaDex]

 

[PstPstPst]

This really impressed me. The description and brief premise didn’t jump out to me too much, but the actual story itself was super captivating.

The translation on the first chapter was fine but the syntax needed adjusting so it doesn’t feel so dicey. However, it rocketed up after that. Genuinely engrossing and the art is great. I love that there’s still a lot of mystery even 20 chapters in without it feeling like they were just lazily beefing up the main character. I don’t usually leave reviews, but this should have so much more attention.

 

[dybc]

kinda really hate how he didn't think about his friends back at home when he escaped.he hardly gave a damn at all.if he even cared to keep jemina safe,he would've brought her with him,instead of being hell bent on revenge.

there are brief mentions of jemina working at a covenant,but he hardly cares about it.why do the nobles even mention her when he doesn't even bring her up?he doesn't even want to see her.

only at chap 38 when he gets official permission does he raid the thieves hideout,and it's not for helping his old buddies,its for revenge.

jesus,this guy is hellbent on revenge.he doesn't give a damn about anyone else.

where did this random ego personality even jump out from anyway?why do you automatically assume he's a ghost that lost his memories,not some kind of ego sword?why can he jump between swords?is he linked to you then?why can't he talk while you don't have a sword then?

so many plotholes.this sucks.0/10.