The Stellar Swordmaster

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This really impressed me. The description and brief premise didn’t jump out to me too much, but the actual story itself was super captivating.

The translation on the first chapter was fine but the syntax needed adjusting so it doesn’t feel so dicey. However, it rocketed up after that. Genuinely engrossing and the art is great. I love that there’s still a lot of mystery even 20 chapters in without it feeling like they were just lazily beefing up the main character. I don’t usually leave reviews, but this should have so much more attention.
 
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kinda really hate how he didn't think about his friends back at home when he escaped.he hardly gave a damn at all.if he even cared to keep jemina safe,he would've brought her with him,instead of being hell bent on revenge.

there are brief mentions of jemina working at a covenant,but he hardly cares about it.why do the nobles even mention her when he doesn't even bring her up?he doesn't even want to see her.

only at chap 38 when he gets official permission does he raid the thieves hideout,and it's not for helping his old buddies,its for revenge.

jesus,this guy is hellbent on revenge.he doesn't give a damn about anyone else.

where did this random ego personality even jump out from anyway?why do you automatically assume he's a ghost that lost his memories,not some kind of ego sword?why can he jump between swords?is he linked to you then?why can't he talk while you don't have a sword then?

so many plotholes.this sucks.0/10.
 
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can i just say that this series has very quickly become one of my most loved and favorite to read the thrill and exitement reading this and watching him rise has made me very very happy and i cant wait to see more of this seires
 
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umm hey,

don’t care how old this message is—me replying to it might be the most embarrassing thing I could do, but just to clear things up, them words weren’t just about revenge.

like fr, would you be able to fight someone while carrying a baby and a sword for someone else's sake, just for the sake of revenge?
(take that as an example.)

and it's not like he just abandoned them for revenge either. like, if he really left her behind, why’d he take Jemina away from the church? why would he fight those thieves to reclaim their home instead of goin’ straight to Jack to assassinate him or ask where Godwin is?

and last thing—if he truly didn’t give a damn about anyone, then he might as well stop shining, ‘cause he wouldn’t achieve anything.

oh and btw, he later learns how to use telepathy—he doesn’t even need to hold a sword or touch it to talk to it now.

not tryna go against your comment or anything, but maybe give it another look? more chapters are droppin’, in case you haven’t read ‘em yet or maybe stopped halfway.
 
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kinda really hate how he didn't think about his friends back at home when he escaped.he hardly gave a damn at all.if he even cared to keep jemina safe,he would've brought her with him,instead of being hell bent on revenge.

there are brief mentions of jemina working at a covenant,but he hardly cares about it.why do the nobles even mention her when he doesn't even bring her up?he doesn't even want to see her.

only at chap 38 when he gets official permission does he raid the thieves hideout,and it's not for helping his old buddies,its for revenge.

jesus,this guy is hellbent on revenge.he doesn't give a damn about anyone else.

where did this random ego personality even jump out from anyway?why do you automatically assume he's a ghost that lost his memories,not some kind of ego sword?why can he jump between swords?is he linked to you then?why can't he talk while you don't have a sword then?

so many plotholes.this sucks.0/10.

kinda really hate how he didn't think about his friends back at home when he escaped.he hardly gave a damn at all.if he even cared to keep jemina safe,he would've brought her with him,instead of being hell bent on revenge.

there are brief mentions of jemina working at a covenant,but he hardly cares about it.why do the nobles even mention her when he doesn't even bring her up?he doesn't even want to see her.

only at chap 38 when he gets official permission does he raid the thieves hideout,and it's not for helping his old buddies,its for revenge.

jesus,this guy is hellbent on revenge.he doesn't give a damn about anyone else.

where did this random ego personality even jump out from anyway?why do you automatically assume he's a ghost that lost his memories,not some kind of ego sword?why can he jump between swords?is he linked to you then?why can't he talk while you don't have a sword then?

so many plotholes.this sucks.0/10.
umm hey,

don’t care how old this message is—me replying to it might be the most embarrassing thing I could do, but just to clear things up, them words weren’t just about revenge.

like fr, would you be able to fight someone while carrying a baby and a sword for someone else's sake, just for the sake of revenge?
(take that as an example.)

and it's not like he just abandoned them for revenge either. like, if he really left her behind, why’d he take Jemina away from the church? why would he fight those thieves to reclaim their home instead of goin’ straight to Jack to assassinate him or ask where Godwin is?

and last thing—if he truly didn’t give a damn about anyone, then he might as well stop shining, ‘cause he wouldn’t achieve anything.

oh and btw, he later learns how to use telepathy—he doesn’t even need to hold a sword or touch it to talk to it now.

not tryna go against your comment or anything, but maybe give it another look? more chapters are droppin’, in case you haven’t read ‘em yet or maybe stopped halfway.
 

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