The Support Ate it All - Ch. 2

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Ok a slot machine that has a hidden reward of a elixir with a side effect that needs a elemental resistance skill. Thats so specific that im seeing that this might be a crudely written story. Author really only needed to include something like "well if i didnt have the s rank elemental resistance skill, i would have to take a year to finally consume the elixir." just to add some depth. Without it, it feels like its a way too specific reward just for convenience.
 
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Seriously, is Rokari a rebrand of Luacomics? Same poor QC, wrong pronouns, paywalled website, watermark with a moon (=luna)...
 
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Ah yes, the classic pet peeve of mine. Original game mc is an expert is, is a classic computer, keyboard + mouse type.
And somehow, mc is the best at everything now that it's turned to reality and knows how to use skills perfectly, even those he doesn't copy.
 
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Ok a slot machine that has a hidden reward of a elixir with a side effect that needs a elemental resistance skill. Thats so specific that im seeing that this might be a crudely written story. Author really only needed to include something like "well if i didnt have the s rank elemental resistance skill, i would have to take a year to finally consume the elixir." just to add some depth. Without it, it feels like its a way too specific reward just for convenience.
Yep this bit specifically is what threw me out of the immersion. Like he's not taking ANY time to think or doubt or consider his decisions at all. He just knows everything and is conveniently handed all of the items and skills he needs exactly when he needs them.

This story really was badly written.
 

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