The Witch And Another World Girls

[MangaDex]

 

[SLeM9999]

Chapter 3 Wanzy translations have a number of errors.

• lots of occurrences of "GODDNESS" that likely should be "GODDESS"
• page 8, occurrence of "GODNESS"
• page 2, "YOU ARE A HEROIN" in text, should be "YOU ARE A HEROINE"
• several times, there are missing articles before "GODDNESS". For example, page 2, "HEROS HAVE TO DO THE MISSIONS GODDNESS GAVE THEM." That only works if "GODDNESS" is a specific title or name; otherwise you need something like "DO THE MISSIONS THE GODDNESS" or "DO THE MISSIONS YOUR GODDNESS". The use of "YOUR" would be consistent with page 2 "IT IS POSSIBLE THAT YOUR GODDNESS"

 

[WAN303]

Chapter 3 Wanzy translations have a number of errors.

• lots of occurrences of "GODDNESS" that likely should be "GODDESS"
• page 8, occurrence of "GODNESS"
• page 2, "YOU ARE A HEROIN" in text, should be "YOU ARE A HEROINE"
• several times, there are missing articles before "GODDNESS". For example, page 2, "HEROS HAVE TO DO THE MISSIONS GODDNESS GAVE THEM." That only works if "GODDNESS" is a specific title or name; otherwise you need something like "DO THE MISSIONS THE GODDNESS" or "DO THE MISSIONS YOUR GODDNESS". The use of "YOUR" would be consistent with page 2 "IT IS POSSIBLE THAT YOUR GODDNESS"

Thank you for letting me know. I will report it to my translator so he won't make a mistake again.

 

[angyalalex]

A bit hard to follow which text bubble come one after the other

 

[WAN303]

A bit hard to follow which text bubble come one after the other

Sorry if it makes it difficult for you to read it. It starts from right to left. Also I'm still new at this so there might be a lot of mistakes. Thanks for letting me know.