There's No Way My Delinquent is This Cute - Ch. 2

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And this manga is already retarded. The FMC is a damn airhead. The dude on the cove, the delinquent, is a shit head. The only one with any common sense is the one with black hair and somehow will end up losing his childhood friends attention.

This was written by a woman. It gives off shoujo vibes. It gives me the same feeling as Koi Inu. Terribly written.
 
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goes from not being able to do anything against stalker to delinquent that will ruin nosy girls life in two seconds flat, impressive?
 
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OK this looks like a piece of shit already, I feel so bad for Male childhood friend, I actually liked him with FMC but instead FMC is a complete dumbass, then theres white haired boy who looked weak as fuck at the start but turns out to be super important and about to ruin cute dumbass FMC with his NTR S&M bullshit, THEN theres also the black hair girl who cheated with white haired boy on the ex blond who has now fallen for the Male Childhood friend but she too looks crazy ....... So atm I hate every single char except for the nice looking male childhood friend who obviously looks to have a sad life already.......

Xxjuggernaut was right in that it looks like another abomination series just like Koi Inu and by god is that series one of the worst pieces of garbage I've ever seen to the point that all its fans think the author is trying to kill the series themselves since they hate it
 
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Definitely girl x delinquent then she got pregnant early, bad life broken household later
 
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...It's not a good sign when there's no coherent plot evident 2 chapters in and it already looks like a messy shitshow. Jesus, the fucking plot synopsis is further ahead in the story than this. And what about the male childhood friend? Like, what, once she's carrying around the mini-doll of a dead delinquent she's blaming herself for cursing she's apparently going to fall in love with it? Or something? Why take so much time introducing characters like this in your first two fucking chapters if they aren't going to the be the focus character?
 
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Reading the first chapter foreshadowes how terrible this will be. The author should probably look for a different job or start over with a different theme.
 
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what the fuck

this makes no sense

I'll be cheering for the childhood friend since I already hare everyone else
 
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Well, supposedly the white haired dude's gonna die so I doubt he's end game.

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Edit: This was in the synopsis but okay.
 
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wow FMC is kinds shit

instead of going for the childhood friend who is decent and protected her go for the guy that treated you like shit.

good writing tbh
 

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