Top 1 Fighting Tutoring - Ch. 30

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Skipped through the chapter.
Bla bla bla. I was bullied so it justifies me being a bully now. Plz feel bad for me.

I'm expecting he loses.
Or wins and doesn't join the group.
 
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i dont fucking care about your sob flashback story just get cucked hard by some 5'6ft twink
 
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Can't say I like when authors start making flashback chapters in the middle of a fighting scene. Do that stuff either before or after.
Agreed, more often than it throws a monkey wrench into the pacing of a fight and worst of all it’s only worth it around half the time.

Author should’ve shrunk these past 2 chapters into a single one and swapped it out for the chapter we wasted watching the simp beat up those street thugs. Then when he’s getting choked out, do something similar to THIS where all of his memories are flashing in the same page or so for added dramatic affect before he goes out.
 

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