Tower of Campanella - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Meiko

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My good friend, alot can change in a years, I speak from experience, mark thy words here and now, you will find love, maybe you will too reader

Have a noice day even if you dont
 
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thanks for the work so far! here's the more important changes i can suggest:

ch1 p41: your -> you're.
ch2 p4: everything doesn't go well -> nothing goes well / everything goes poorly. ch2 p4: why did i even raise you this far -> why have i raised you until now? ch2 p27: their -> they're. ch2 p34: your -> you're.
ch3 p7: the lymph nodes -> my lymph nodes.

also, has this series been dropped? i'm interested in picking it up, but wouldn't want to overstep of course. thanks again !
 
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Thanks for the suggestions, I'll change the parts you mentioned on Saturday/Sunday when I upload the next chapter.
 
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What's Crich? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Crich This? or a diff ref

man that one 'scout' is sus, i mean it's almost too smooth/i feel like most ppl would be taken aback if they try to recruit someone for a job and them being told 'i'll be dead in a few years'


Pancreatic Cancer... I guess you could say its... eating away at her?

I am not sorry, they will find me in the cool corner.
is that why that series/movie(?) is called ' i want to eat your pancreas' lol

thanks for the chapter
 
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