Tsubaki-sama Hasn't Bloomed Yet! - Vol. 2 Ch. 11

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Couldn't she have just worn her swimsuit underneath, like she had started the day doing?
 
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@Samhill
I've been integrating the stuff they say outside the bubbles inside the speech bubbles, so you're not missing anything.
 
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@Samhill
It's always in a bubble in the same panel. I'll try how outside the panel looks though, thanks for the suggestion.
 
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@Hikotoshi What I mean is I can't tell what's inside bubble dialog and what is outside bubble dialog. On page 10: "Look, I'll just dry it by doing this!" "I'm really lucky it's such good weather today!" So I see outside the bubble a short line of text and an exclamation point, and a long line of text and an exclamation point. To me, this seems like this is all outside text and not inside text.
 
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I tried incorporating a more conclusive approach to out of bubble text in chapter 8 by mixing up panel notes and redrawing, please let me know if it is more enjoyable this way!
 
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Well this chapter really raised the lewd bar. Only up from here.
 
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@Hikotoshi
please consider using a more easily readable font for the main bubbles. augie is cute but a more standard font flows better whilst reading.

see this compilation for a nice list of em:
guide for the fonts || free font download


dunno if you’re using photoshop, but if so, you can always use a text outline, ie if your text is black, outline it with a white outer glow or stroke. that way you can get away with not redrawing the text outside the bubble if you wanna avoid redrawing too much, like me (tho im just being lazy).
 

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