Yeah I came to write this felt super forced to make her lifespan end. MC at no point actually mentioned his power when he could have. It's when you see writing like this I start to get worried for the rest of the series :SNot sure how I'm supposed to feel about a person being so needlessly over-protective, to the point of practically giving away their life, when the person they want to protect even said "I've got this".
Like she may just not want to see her friends possibly get hurt anymore, but there must have been a better way to write it; this came across as annoying rather than dramatic.
I have some WN knowledge so I know how it goes but this chapter makes it feel forced, I really really hope they don't deviate cause if they do this story will get janky fast.Technically she was already dying
So no worries, as long as they follow the WN, story will still be goodBased on the WN, she already using her lifespan to make herself unnoticed by the surrounding and was asleep all this time until Ed arrives. Her being awake is what attracted the monsters there and the last time she remembers Ed, he was pretty much not a combatant.
The time passed in Tia world when Ed was banished was only few years so of course she doesn't know how strong Ed has become. She also been staying asleep in hopes that any of the former hero party come back alive, but after Ed has already confirmed that Hero and Monk is dead and finally being able to see Ed again, Tia have no regrets left and her only final wish from Ed is to have him bring her to Hero and Monk final resting place so she can finally rest (die)
Eh this was fairly realtisic all things considered the girl is literally dealing with survivors guilt and a mass amount of trauma not mention being alone for who knows how long to sit to just dwell on everything. She is not in a healthy mental state so of course when someone she cares about becomes back into her life she'd be desperate to make sure he'd stay safe, she is not well to put it lightly.Not sure how I'm supposed to feel about a person being so needlessly over-protective, to the point of practically giving away their life, when the person they want to protect even said "I've got this".
Like she may just not want to see her friends possibly get hurt anymore, but there must have been a better way to write it; this came across as annoying rather than dramatic.
Oh I got that, but it just feels like they could have written or portrayed it a lot better, because it came of as silly and kinda stupid rather than as the significant dramatic thing that it should have been.the girl is literally dealing with survivors guilt and a mass amount of trauma