Tsuruko Returns the Favor - Ch. 14 - THE CRANE'S WISH

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Yeah I don't think this series will ever reach 30 chapters. We already on chapter 15 and the sister is barely mentioned. It's getting boring.
 
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Yeah I don't think this series will ever reach 30 chapters. We already on chapter 15 and the sister is barely mentioned. It's getting boring.
Stole that --yawn-- right outta my mouth :02:

I'm guessing this will last the usual 22 or 23. Shame it would outlast Moebana, though, since that had actual characters and plot
 
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  • I have to go there to find out my dead sister’s secret!
  • Immediately forgets about it

At this point have to wonder, is the author going to reveal that she faked her death to introduce some dumb drama toward the climax?
 
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Yeah I don't think this series will ever reach 30 chapters. We already on chapter 15 and the sister is barely mentioned. It's getting boring.
  • I have to go there to find out my dead sister’s secret!
  • Immediately forgets about it

At this point have to wonder, is the author going to reveal that she faked her death to introduce some dumb drama toward the climax?
Well, author has 4 weeks until the next chapter...If there isn't something at that point, I don't think there ever will be.
 
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Why do people post about the sister every week? It was just a plot device to get these two together in this situation.
 
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Why do people post about the sister every week? It was just a plot device to get these two together in this situation.
because she was supposed to be the driving motivation of the MC. Notice when the chapter is not about "We HaVe To HiDe OuR rElAtIoNsHiP", MC keeps yapping that he want to find his sister secret and then 2 pages later forget about it as soon as he arrived at the cafe.
 
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because she was supposed to be the driving motivation of the MC. Notice when the chapter is not about "We HaVe To HiDe OuR rElAtIoNsHiP", MC keeps yapping that he want to find his sister secret and then 2 pages later forget about it as soon as he arrived at the cafe.
Yeah it would have been much better if he just was there trying to learn more about his sister and what made her happy. Maybe like, he realizes that she was suffering from depression for a while or something and just spends time there to think about her.

I am confident that this part of the plot didn't need to be this way and it would still work as a story.
 

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