Uchi no Deshi ga Itsu no Manika Jinrui Saikyou ni Natte-ite, Nan no Sainou Monai Shishou no Ore ga, Sore wo Koeru Uchuu Saikyou ni Go Nintei Sareteir…

[MangaDex]

 

[jhs_reika]

If you want to snipe, I think you need to fix the grammars.
Your translation was... more imperfect than Imperfect Scans'.

 

[Yourcommand]

Page 10 black text on black background.

 

[lesseffective]

If you want to snipe, I think you need to fix the grammars.
Your translation was... more imperfect than Imperfect Scans'.

Also, based on the thumbnail art on the raw site, this is actually 4.3, and what Imperfect released as 4 was only 4.1 and 4.2.

 

[HaikenEdge]

Well, this translation's borderline incoherent.

 

[Maelbek]

Yeah, translation is very very rough. Is this MTL?

 

[irem01]

so his power is he is patient lmao

 

[Manga_Wanka]

If you want to snipe, I think you need to fix the grammars.
Your translation was... more imperfect than Imperfect Scans'.

Aaa..sorry but I think I didn't sniped as imperfect Scans is not active anymore and they released ch 1-4 somewhere so i had to searched that and publish it here...as there group has 'anyone upload permission'.
And now I am continuing this manga......And as for the grammer mistakes....I AM ABSOLUTELY SORRY THAT TIME I DIDNT HAD A PROOFREADER SO I JUST TLed and PR it....but...Please forgive me for these ones ....🙂

 

[Manga_Wanka]

And I tried to fix the problems you mentioned... Very much thankyou for pointing out...Also as my TL was busy and I am learning Japanese so I tried to do this, but it was not good I guess, so I will try to do a better job Next time...🙏🙂

 

[jhs_reika]

Aaa..sorry but I think I didn't sniped as imperfect Scans is not active anymore and they released ch 1-4 somewhere so i had to searched that and publish it here...as there group has 'anyone upload permission'.
And now I am continuing this manga......And as for the grammer mistakes....I AM ABSOLUTELY SORRY THAT TIME I DIDNT HAD A PROOFREADER SO I JUST TLed and PR it....but...Please forgive me for these ones ....🙂

And I tried to fix the problems you mentioned... Very much thankyou for pointing out...Also as my TL was busy and I am learning Japanese so I tried to do this, but it was not good I guess, so I will try to do a better job Next time...🙏🙂

I see that you are not a native english speaker. In the meantime, you can use free online proofreaders like QuillBot or Scribbr. They can fix simple grammar mistakes.