Unripened Expression - Ch. 47

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The entire harem in one room? This is a mess I can't wait to see.?
 
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@KikaXi it seems that there's a small mistake here "What the. Why did has he called him as well? They don't get along that well. Why..." I think there's meant to be only one word, "did" or "has"? And the use of "well" in both sentences seems awkward, perhaps you could use "too" instead of "as well"?

No disrespect intended! I just wanted to offer some feedback;;; Thank you for the translation and all your efforts! <3
 

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