Viper in the Vale
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The synopsis don’t make sense🤨
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a group tried to translate this before but the lawyer team behind the author was really fast and jumped on the group. Though that one was the webnovel.
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@someunregpunk This is my original work.
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that's weird. I remember this title before. ah well perhaps it's another viper.
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Pretty good, the motivation is kinda unclear. As in it’s hard to tell but from what i can tell she didn’t plan on marrying the heroines brother, and in the description you say she was a level designer assistant but you only mention she was a former employee, she want revenge but that’s in the description not the promo???? then she is scheming with the second prince, and then the prince is telling her to stop but she made a promise. Like why is she in
Oh yeah and she want to be a better villainess because the game didn’t do her justice. Also why is she in cahoots with the second prince?
Also why is the description different from the promo, why is the description better than the promo? (Sorry I feel like i’m being kind of harsh so don’t take it too personal) Like yes they mention it’s a game but in the description it says it was a best selling game but in the promo it doesn’t. And in the promo it doesn’t even give a description of the game just the title “Thorny Roses”. Although they both mention the original villainess was written poorly, so Cider wants to become a better villainess than the one in the game. And take revenge on those who wronged her.
Anyways sorry for the long post I just wanted to critique your promo because there’s room for improvement. Also I did like the characters designs, except for the second prince lol. I hope you make more stuff in the future, it doesn’t have to be specifically this story. Tbh I just wanna see the romance between the Heroines Brother and the Cider.
Oh yeah and she want to be a better villainess because the game didn’t do her justice. Also why is she in cahoots with the second prince?
Also why is the description different from the promo, why is the description better than the promo? (Sorry I feel like i’m being kind of harsh so don’t take it too personal) Like yes they mention it’s a game but in the description it says it was a best selling game but in the promo it doesn’t. And in the promo it doesn’t even give a description of the game just the title “Thorny Roses”. Although they both mention the original villainess was written poorly, so Cider wants to become a better villainess than the one in the game. And take revenge on those who wronged her.
Anyways sorry for the long post I just wanted to critique your promo because there’s room for improvement. Also I did like the characters designs, except for the second prince lol. I hope you make more stuff in the future, it doesn’t have to be specifically this story. Tbh I just wanna see the romance between the Heroines Brother and the Cider.
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