VR HERO

[MangaDex]

 

[forestrepublic]

Heres a basic review that wont require that much brain power to use, cause I know some of y'all lack that.

Art - Pretty good
Writing - The dialogue in this story is so poorly written that it makes me want to break the fourth wall and look directly into an imaginary camera as if I were on a corny sitcom. It's as if the characters are speaking in some sort of cryptic language, making me question whether the source of the problem is a result of translation errors or just plain bad writing. The confusion and mental gymnastics required to make sense of the dialogue are exhausting and take away from the overall enjoyment of the story. The characters' words are so convoluted and nonsensical that it feels like they're speaking in riddles rather than engaging in genuine conversation. This type of writing not only detracts from the story's quality, but it also alienates the reader, leaving them feeling frustrated and disengaged. In order for a story to truly captivate its audience, the dialogue must be clear, concise, and meaningful. Unfortunately, this story falls short in that regard, leaving a sour taste in the mouth of any reader who dares to attempt to decipher its confusing language.
6/10

 

[Acertaincabdriver]

I find it to be a brain dead story(kinda like lvl999 wooden stick) with a rather fun idea of conflicting morals with money . The main charcater is forced to do evil task for powers , and gets veiwed as a hero . His world outside the game is in shambles and his power fantasy leads him to believing his life can change , however when real problems pop up he begins to fall to cowardice and try and flee.
All in all I think this is solid the mc is well written feeling unlikeable in real life but relatable , theirs no romanc so don't expect your heart to go all fuzzy. However the satisfaction I feel when he stands up for himself is immense . This has a real emotional growth and a broken mc , and that's all i need solid 7 out of 10 .
better then average with room for improvement .

 

[Scorpion2890]

I like it but I noticed ai art. Bruh

 

[Lvl30LoliLewder]

dropped on chapter one because the writing is so edgy i cut my finger trying to click on the next chapter button

 

[sterven]

then you can enjoy it with no problems

 

[mavining]

If brain rot is your thing, reading this will get you your fix. If you want an example of how poorly this is put together, without subjecting yourself to the mindf**k of a story, click chapter 52, find the page that has a green shorts kid...which I only guess is shorts because of the panel next. Take a good look at the swatches and drawing. That should explain everything you need to know.

 

[Jadlz]

They say theres a fine line between madness and genuisity, so you'd think theres another line between masterpiece and trash. But HELL NAH to that bs, you either like it or dont like it. The story isnt that complex and any "brain rot" stems from having been overloaded with solo leveling rip offs. Ultimately, for those interested, read the first 10 chapters and decide for yourself. Personally i am fond of the twists and writing, as its remniscent to the complexities of western writing unlike most manga/manhwa/light novel shounen plots.

 

[mavining]

They say theres a fine line between madness and genuisity, so you'd think theres another line between masterpiece and trash. But HELL NAH to that bs, you either like it or dont like it. The story isnt that complex and any "brain rot" stems from having been overloaded with solo leveling rip offs. Ultimately, for those interested, read the first 10 chapters and decide for yourself. Personally i am fond of the twists and writing, as its remniscent to the complexities of western writing unlike most manga/manhwa/light novel shounen plots.

this is not deep. it's not even close, it's just throwing dark against a wall and hoping it feels coherent.

 

[69qwertylover]

everything crumbles at the "plot twist" episode, everything is a lie, its like a new manhwa during that one chapter, overall edgy middleschooler wetdream/10, 100% would recommend