OK, the translation is better this time. The snare is called a snare, etc. The first chapter has a repeat of a mistake from the first version though: Deer have antlers, not horns (two very different things). Chapter 3 managed to get it right, so I won't moan more about it.
Mangaupdates says that this manga is still being published, with 8 volumes so far, so it might get better later on. I hope you can keep it up for a while.