Watashi wo Anata ni Hore sasete - Oneshot

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Not sure I love the really sketchy/rough art style. At times it looks like the artist just gave up halfway through drawing a scene.

Also not sure if this is a translation or writing issue but there are a few places where the narration and speech don't seem to flow correctly and make it hard to follow.

Otherwise it's a sort of interesting concept that unfortunately usually seems to fail in other works that attempt it. Let's see where it goes.
 
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I think the added drama of the murderous father, dead mother, and dying 'real' personality, is a bit much - this set up would have worked with just the idea that he needed to win over the other personalities before their relationship was okayed.
Well, I'll see how it goes, maybe it'll win me over?
 
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I think the added drama of the murderous father, dead mother, and dying 'real' personality, is a bit much - this set up would have worked with just the idea that he needed to win over the other personalities before their relationship was okayed.
Well, I'll see how it goes, maybe it'll win me over?
I'd say it's better this way. If her deep mental instability was congenital, triggered by no external factors, I'm not sure the dude would care to get involved too much with her. However, since it's PTSD related, it's much easier for him. In fact he seems to feel a little bit responsible considering he happened to be right there. That being said, she might have inherited susceptibility from her father, assuming mental health issues contributed to the murder.
 
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This is gonna hurt one of them in the end huh..
For sure, I’m going to assume the main personality is going to find out about this deal and assume it’s another betrayal to her after she begins to develop some feelings. In the end though I just feel the word “betrayal” is key unless this turns out to be a fluffy and nice manga.

Plus she probably feels a little hurt by the other personality pushing with this romance but is probably going along with it believing that the “cheery” personality is the main one.
 
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This looks like it can be dropped by artist at any moment. Well, whatever, subscribe. Let's see how long it will live
 

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