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Her character is growing, but does it mean Narumi kept on watching all this time? In the novel, she surprises everyone, and Narumi goes after her. Can't remember if she got hit or not, but should have been a few times at most until Narumi protected her. But this was a whole spectacle.
 
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The harem "tag" is just a tag. It explicitly doesn't mean that he will end up with multiple girls in the end. I could look up examples, but I am on my phone and I'm sure you have some examples in mind of manga with the harem tag where there is a 1:1 couple at the end
 
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Fuck yeah let's gooooo...

NO.

Fuck you.
There is no cool "let's go" moment when you let someone all but fucking die before you step in; that's called being a fucking moron.

The page count on this ruins the plot.
How so?
Well, does it make you hard to see beautiful women get the shit knocked out of them? (Because, if so, I would submit you've never experienced being an adult human.)
And the only reason for the author to draw this shit out over a full chapter is either lack of talent (page count over plot), or seriously concerning psychopathy.

Either way, I keep skipping pages and pages of useless bullshit just to read the five goddamn pages of worthwhile dialogue and art put of 20+ pages of utter dreck and slop.

The requirement for page count over content ruins a good plot.

This could have been a great story; goddamn shame the author fucked it up.
 

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