Yankee JK Kuzuhana-chan: Another Side of the Heroine - Ch. 2 - Too close Ushigome-san!!!

[MangaDex]

 

[Jebsu]

Please tell me this mofo didn't start a second manga while there's literally zero progress in the first series...

 

[fsadfsad]

Translation isn't bad, but you should remove these purple frames. Also, you didn't translate most of dialogue on page 4. Not bad on first time, but 4 for really needs translation. @swaggytr0n

 

[SwaggyT]

Translation isn't bad, but you should remove these purple frames. Also, you didn't translate most of dialogue on page 4. Not bad on first time, but 4 for really needs translation. @swaggytr0n

Any tool recommendations I can use for that? I don’t know how else to do it other than use a white blob with Canva.

 

[asian_weeb]

Hodoka
Otomo-chi

Needs more proofreading.

 

[fsadfsad]

Any tool recommendations I can use for that? I don’t know how else to do it other than use a white blob with Canva.

Inkscape is a great tool for editing text itself. Personally, as a guy who dealt with webcomics on Tapas, I use Krita for redraws and inkscape for text.

If you don't have redrawer/skill to redraw, I suggest putting the translations of dialogue outside the speech bubbles onto page margins.

 

[galaxia9]

I can't say I saw a problem with her first attempt, it looked rather good on her.

And then she mentioned people only looking at her in perverted ways. Sorry, Ushigomi, I feel bad now.

 

[Chronigan]

@SwaggyT thanks for the translation!

As an Ushigome fan I really liked this chapter. I was really surprised that they remembered that incident from the beginning. Now if they would just remember that she was mean at fhe start and have her apologize.

 

[RanmaChaos]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[Late_Komei]

As an Ushigome fan, this chapter is pretty solid terms of ecchi and character development.

 

[henrybac0n]

Good progress, but you need to translate the text outside of the bubbles as well. It's helpful for the readers. You can leave the SFX alone for now.

 

[ice_ivy]

Spin-off has more characters progress in two chapters than the main story in 200 ><
Thanks for the TL, keep it up <3

 

[AnonymousContributor]

Needs more proofreading.

don't forget "Ushigomi"

The art style got me looking like this was a parallel version of Yankee JK kuzuhana chan with more progress.

Also Yuna is Ushigome's given name.

Choose the Eastern or Western naming order but going both ways is stupid. If you want Western order, better read the main character's name as Hodaka Saotome.
Page 22 has untranslated dialogue

 

[Bonzalez]

Crazy how the author makes a spinoff claiming to be all about Kuzuhana and then forgets that in the second chapter